Friday 5 April 2013
When i was walking down the stairs
I was going to my m8s house. I saw a blue fence it was weird. So I carryed on walking. And then I got there. And I got there and we had some lunch.It was so nice. we went to mine. And we saw the blue fence and we looked over It. we saw this It was so so cool we went down It and we weher so amazed and we saw a dog it was cool and then my nana aperd we where happy cuse my nana is a ninja the end good day
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Mrs Fraser - Good effort. You have explained what you have done with your friend. I would now like to see you add some WOW words and and out "and" and "then" you have used them too often. Read to it again does it make sense? Please don't use text language when writing.
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