Screech, suddenly the car stopped, several sets of tyres
burnt on the hot, dry concrete. The person in the pink car pulled out in front of
the car in front of us. She was in the lane next to us. She let the car in
front of us through, in front of herself but then decided to stop half way in
our lane. She rapidly started to speed of down into the horizon. Once we got
pass the set of traffic lights she swerved jaggedly back into the lane next to
us. Recklessly regaining control driving down into the street.
Mrs Fraser - you have used some great WOW words here Jen and painted a picture in the readers mind. I would now like to see you go back and proof read with care and see if you can change the word "front" 4 times in the middle sentences. Can you think of another word?
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