Monday, 1 April 2013

A weird forest! by logan

Once there was a very big forest. People said it was cursed. If you went there people will get nightmares. Swish the trees swayed like the haunted house. It was very creepy. Lightning always hit the trees and places around the forest. Alot of people have tried to go to the other side of the forest but they have not come back or failed to cross it. People said the trees kept moving and the path never ends but that might not be true because nobody has past it yet. So the legend goes on about the weird forest forever.

1 comment:

  1. Mrs Fraser - I was getting frightened reading this, you certainly painted a picture in my mind. Once again go back and edit it leaving a space after full stops.

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