Sunday 7 April 2013

the war by josh

boom i can hear the gun shoots . Kapow I can hear the booms dropping from the helicopter. I can see blood alover the ground. But then i see my friend get shoot. I cried so bad. I go in shooting everywhere boom kapow I pick up my friend and he’s got shoot he’s bleeding but he will live. I look around I see a stairway I ran towards it and i ran down the stairs but its to late he’s dead. I try to help him but its to late the last words he said was win the war.

1 comment:

  1. nice story but u u should proof read your work
    also what war was this?

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