Rain,baden
It was raining as I was waiting for a taxi. The cold wet rain kept me from falling alseep. As I buttoned up my soaking coat I saw a yellow car driving round a corner with letters saying taxi on the roof of the vehicle. '' Taxi!" I shouted to the driver. It looked like it was going to pass me but the automobile suddenly stopped in its tracks. The window facing me slid down and a tough looking man told me to get in. As I got into the car I hummed to myself quietly.
I like this piece of writing. You left the reader wondering at the end, where were you going? what were you humming? Certainly got me thinking. I would like to see you use a new line when someone speaks - check out a novel to see what I mean.
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