One day in 1973 builders built two staircases to see what
one was better. They chose two friends of the street. They got the kids to run
up the death stairs they thought the one on the right was better than they had
a race. But they didn’t know what was going to happen it was going to change their
lives forever and ever. The whistle when
off. The child on the left tripped and blood started to poor out of his leg he
had to be air lifted to hospital he was stuck in a wheelchair forever and ever…
Interesting piece of writing Callum. I wonder why you choose 1973? I would have liked to see more WOW words and the other figurative language features we have been using in class. Can you proof read and edit it to include these?
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