Once I was sitting in my pale white bath with a bright
orange candle beside me in a long exhausting power cut. When I saw a mysterious figure lurking in the hall way.
So I hopped out of the bath, put my clothes on and grabbed
the candle anxiously and waited. Then I saw the figure separate a piece of the
carpet , I start creeping towards the figure it starts to run away from me I
stop for a split second and I hear a
meow
And then I realise it is my cat tom who was in the hall.
Mrs Fraser - you have included some WOW words. I would now like to see you use some of the figurative language features we have been using in class to make your writing more interesting for the reader.
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