This
morning I decided to ask my friends if they would like
to walk throw the dark forbiden forest. We
jumped the fence but to our suprise it was not all forset. There was a path, we
walked down it. It lead to a sudden trun. Tump! We turned suddenly. A small,
unstable tree feel over. We walked up one step then I noticed something odd. A
big old tree suddenly appared. We walked closer to it, there was something
about the tree that was odd. Like i have seen the tree before. We decided to go
home and sleep.
Mrs Fraser - you got me thinking with your choice of words "dark forbidden forest" why are forests often described as being forbidden? You are using more WOW words in your writing. Please proof read and edit again - checking your spelling.
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