Thursday, 4 April 2013

The forbiden forest by jennifer

This morning I decided to ask my friends if they would like to walk throw the dark forbiden  forest. We jumped the fence but to our suprise it was not all forset. There was a path, we walked down it. It lead to a sudden trun. Tump! We turned suddenly. A small, unstable tree feel over. We walked up one step then I noticed something odd. A big old tree suddenly appared. We walked closer to it, there was something about the tree that was odd. Like i have seen the tree before. We decided to go home and sleep.
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1 comment:

  1. Mrs Fraser - you got me thinking with your choice of words "dark forbidden forest" why are forests often described as being forbidden? You are using more WOW words in your writing. Please proof read and edit again - checking your spelling.

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