Dark
shadows lurk behind the trees of the wonder wood forest not wasting one second
of watching me out of nowhere a orange tabby cat leaps out onto the old path
for a while it sits in silence then it speaks ‘hurry quickly into the bush’
before I could say a word I get pushed into a bush frightened of how a
mysterious slender tabby cat pushed me into a bush . The slender tabby cat
bowed its head and spoke once more ‘hello milady I’m bob, oh look how filthy
you are you need a bath’ soon we separated…
Mrs Fraser
ReplyDeleteI like the WOW words you have used. I would now like you to go back and edit this piece of work. The sentence is too long, even though it is 100 words you still need to add full stops.