Monday 8 April 2013

1. Madi's Kitty Cat


Baking a cake on Saturday morning, I had put the sugar in the bowl and separated the eggs. I heard a mysterious sound coming from the bedroom. “EOooooooooW!!!”  I put down my whisk and tip toed towards the noise. A little nervous, but curious to discover what is behind the closed door.  As I venture forward the noise intensifies but I suspect it is just my kitty cat. I let out a sigh of relief and push open the creaky door, I am shocked to find my pure white kitten covered in orange craft paint. “Into the bath you go!”

2. Madi's Snap Shot


Piper and I had been wandering aimlessly around the damp gardens at the rear of the museum, when we came apon the most beautiful scene. To the left, smooth slate stairs strong and straight. To the right, soft and subtle steps weaving their way through the bright green undergrowth of moss and ferns. Just off the path a bird feeds in a little wooden house on a pole. The taller trees form a canopy to protect us from the drizzle of rain as the weather deteriorates. I don’t have a camera, so instead I take a picture with my mind.


3. Madi's Nightmare


I am running, crashing through the bush, they are getting closer and closer.  My breathing is hard and fast.  Suddenly a branch leaps into my path, as I duck beneath it my foot tangles with the vines growing across the forest floor. I hit the ground hard.  Discouraged but not ready to give up, I clamber towards the bright light shining through the thinning trees. The clearing only meters away, whatever it is behind me is gaining speed and momentum.  My Mum stopped the car suddenly as I let out a scream.  “It’s okay honey it was just a dream.”

Sunday 7 April 2013

the war by josh

boom i can hear the gun shoots . Kapow I can hear the booms dropping from the helicopter. I can see blood alover the ground. But then i see my friend get shoot. I cried so bad. I go in shooting everywhere boom kapow I pick up my friend and he’s got shoot he’s bleeding but he will live. I look around I see a stairway I ran towards it and i ran down the stairs but its to late he’s dead. I try to help him but its to late the last words he said was win the war.

the car by josh



I was in my house watching tv and I saw this car on the road. It was a fancy car like a porch it was red and it was new. The people where playing around in the car going up and down the streets and making skid marks everywhere and a whole bunch of noise. They finely left the car in their driveway. I wanted to have a look. So I took big steps and when I got there the engine was running but no one there then it suddenly stopped so i ran home as fast as i could

Baden

The cat

I was separated from my mum.  I heard a mysterious sound in the hallway.  '' should I,'' I said to myself as I slowly walk to the door.  Then suddenly a bright orange male cat sped past me.  "It was just the cat," I said to myself but as I came back I saw my cat heading towards the bath.  "No!" I shouted to the orange furry cat but it was too late.  Splash! The cat went in the warm soapy water.  Then I hear the most horrible sound a cat could ever make, like a lion just about  to kill me.    

Friday 5 April 2013

The Lollipop Staircase by phoebe

All of a sudden there was a staircase in the middle of my house!! It was formed by lollipops and candy I was absolutely amazed I thought to myself should I explore this wonderful staircase by myself or should I get my mum and sisters?? Oh well I guess I will share so then I went to get my sisters then my mum then brought them to the stairs I said to them ''look its a staircase made out of lollipops and candy'' and then they said ''no its a gross.... foresty staircase with vines and branches but....but....but!!!!


When i was walking down the stairs
I was going to my m8s house. I saw a blue fence it was weird. So I carryed on walking. And then I got there. And I got there and we had some lunch.It was so nice. we went to mine. And we saw the blue fence and we looked over It. we saw this It was so so cool we went down It and we weher so amazed  and we saw a dog it was cool and then my nana aperd we where happy cuse my nana is a ninja the end good day


Thursday 4 April 2013

Vroom! Vroom! The car came speeding like a horse around the corner,  I wasn't worried because my friend and I were playing football in our driveway. Vroom! The engine roared and it sounded like a monster roaring. Then the car started to get faster, louder, closer and I started wondering about what car it was. As it got closer the ground started to shake like an earthquake. I walked slowly towards the racing car and screech! The racing car suddenly stoped. I bumped into the car and fainted. After I gained consciousness I asked my self "Where am I ?"
By Shaurya

The crassy driver by jennifer



Screech, suddenly the car stopped, several sets of tyres burnt on the hot, dry concrete. The person in the pink car pulled out in front of the car in front of us. She was in the lane next to us. She let the car in front of us through, in front of herself but then decided to stop half way in our lane. She rapidly started to speed of down into the horizon. Once we got pass the set of traffic lights she swerved jaggedly back into the lane next to us. Recklessly regaining control driving down into the street.    

The forbiden forest by jennifer

This morning I decided to ask my friends if they would like to walk throw the dark forbiden  forest. We jumped the fence but to our suprise it was not all forset. There was a path, we walked down it. It lead to a sudden trun. Tump! We turned suddenly. A small, unstable tree feel over. We walked up one step then I noticed something odd. A big old tree suddenly appared. We walked closer to it, there was something about the tree that was odd. Like i have seen the tree before. We decided to go home and sleep.
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The movies, By Jaimee

I was heading to the movies with my friends, we were going to see a vampire movie that just come out, anyway so we were driving and the car suddeny stopped, the car had been making a sound like CLANG! the whole day, as I went to check what was wrong I opened the chipped bonnet of the car a big puff of smoke came out of the motor like smoke chugging out of a chimney, I had to call the towtrack because it was that bad, and my friends and I never got to see that movie that day.

Jayden.O. The mysterious walk, don don daaaaaaaaahhhhhhh


It was windy and cold, the track looked mysterious.  My friend and I put on our jackets and sat on the cold damp forest floor, listening eagerly to the tramping instructor. The birds were chirping as loud as a motor bike revving at the start of a race.   The orange cat was stalking them waiting patiently in the long grass. 20 minutes into our walk the rest of the class were tired and separated  into groups to have lunch and a bath in the stream.  The wilderness out here in otago has a weird and eerie feeling to it . Crash!!! 

the death staircase by callum


One day in 1973 builders built two staircases to see what one was better. They chose two friends of the street. They got the kids to run up the death stairs they thought the one on the right was better than they had a race. But they didn’t know what was going to happen it was going to change their lives forever and ever.  The whistle when off. The child on the left tripped and blood started to poor out of his leg he had to be air lifted to hospital he was stuck in a wheelchair forever and ever…

NEK MINIT by phoebe

Left my scooter outside the dairy.......NEK MINIT the car stopped suddenly narrowly missing Drop Dead Fred escaping on my MGP, '' STOOOOOOOP '' I shouted as he sped at what seemed like a hundred miles an hour, across the road, down the ditch and face planted into the duck pond, I sprinted with all my might towards him, to go and help him get out of the ditch. I grabbed his hand it was all sloppy and muddy eeeeeew, but I had forgotten that he was a trickster and he pulls me into the bog.

''DROP DEAD FRED''



The Car Stopped Suddenly by Joel

The car stopped suddenly.
“Nice Hummer!” I said to myself.
A guy walked out and slammed the car door with a bang.  He had a thick bandana, baggy brown jeans with stains on them and a Nike sweatshirt. 
“He looks scary”, I said with a quiver.
He approached me.  I fumbled my step and fell over.
“You got any sugar?” he asked.
“W – what?” I replied confused.
“It’s my mum’s birthday tomorrow and I’m gonna bake her a cake.” He spoke in a deep voice.
“Ah .. no sorry” I breathed fearfully.
He just drove off without saying another word.
Rain,baden

It was raining as I was waiting for a taxi. The cold wet rain kept me from falling alseep. As I buttoned up my soaking coat I saw a yellow car driving round a corner with letters saying  taxi on the roof of the vehicle.  '' Taxi!" I shouted to the driver.  It looked like it was going to pass me but the automobile suddenly stopped in its tracks.  The window facing me slid down and a tough looking man told me to get in.  As I got into the car I hummed to myself quietly.

The Kingdom By Fenella


When I was younger my mum used to tell me these stories about an enchanted kingdom. I loved these stories and would always dream of being there. Years later I have learned more about this amazing place and decided that I would find the kingdom. But it would be hard to find ‘The Stairways of Fate’. Going through the tough terrains and harsh conditions I saw before my bloodshot eyes one stairway which led to the kingdom, the other to being lost for eternity. I was so ecstatic, yet trembling with fear. I took a careful step to the left.

The fabulous holiday, by Asha


The car suddenly stopped, here we are, this is like paradise. We finally got to the seaside village which was in the Spanish turistic island. At this time everyone must have been in the beach, there was no sign of people in the village, so we decided to leave our luggage at the hotel first and then go for a swim at the beach. We all agreed that was a good idea so we headed to the hotel and then made our way to the beach, after the swim mum got us some ice cream and then we went to the famous restaurant called ‘La Marinera’ this couldn’t have been a better holiday.

Dinner, Jaimee

I'm cooking dinner, my sister is upstairs having a bubble bath, my mysterious orange cat is asleep on the fire place, and my mum is in the lounge watching soaps on T.V, wow not mentioning my dad is weird, my parents separated last year and it still feels confusing like when I'm doing long division. Anyway I'm cooking dinner for the first time at my mum's new house the kitchen feels too small, and the bench feels too big but cooking is the one thing I'm good at, CLANG!! OOPS I just dropped the new pasta pot on the ground.

Felix, by Asha

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There he was, Felix, my orange cat, walking towars me knowing what was going to occur as son as he hoped onto the delightful and cozy sofa. But he didn’t jump onto the couch, instead he just lay on the mat deeply staring into my eyes. There was something mysterious about this cat. He finally cameo to the sofa and onto my lap, then I noticed something was really smelly, It was him, Felix. I decided to give him a bath. As soon as I entered the bathroom wit Felix in my hands, I approached to the sink, where I was going to clean him. Then I realised, as I turned the water on, that the soaps had been separated one from another. As I turned to put them back toghether I noticed Felix was gone.

stopped by cate




My bronzed arm hung out the of the open window of the car as we drove along the bumpy road in Darwin Australia.  My favourite Taylor swift song was pumping through my head phones as I nodded to the beat.  The black leather seat of our car was hot beneath me and was burning my legs as we drove. I turned my head to look at my dad driving the car, a look of sheer concentration on his face as negotiated the sharp corners and avoided animals suddenly running across the road as we drove along. And then we stopped...

The Forest, Jaimee

As I climbed down the creepy set of stairs, I listened intently to see if I could hear the wind whispering the words of help from the missing souls that have ventured into the forest and have never returned. As soon as I reached the bottom of the slippery set of stairs, I looked around to see if there was a way through the dark forest without leaving the track and saw another slope with stairs going up it. As I started climbing up them I heard something, SNAP!!, I turned quickly to see a dark figure staring at me.large 4204913417 Week#22

by georgia





I shivered as I walked down the isolated road in the middle of nowhere. I walked barefoot and the sharp gravel was making my feet bleed. I didn’t know where I was going, the darkness engulfed everything. Crunch! It was the sound of gravel under car tyres. I would know that sound anywhere. I looked back, but it was pointless as I could see nothing but blackness. Then suddenly there was a blur of lights as a bright red car whizzed down the road.  The car suddenly stopped, the window rolled down, and a deep voice said ‘get in’.
‘NOW!!!’

Wednesday 3 April 2013

Hust da la vest da BY MATTHEW

Three years ago I was driving on my CAR  going  to the White House .to do my duty as a bodyguard but dis time it world war 3 I felt sweating down my lung and my hart was like boom!boom!boom! Like a bomb .And they send me to the pentagon It was spectacular . SUDDENLY the war STOPPED by rusian and hust da la vest da said the Russians .

Lost By Tyron


I am in Darwin northern Territory of Australia I am on a deserted road and there are kangaroos every where I wonder where am I? I walk clueless of where I am going. The sun is setting I am starving I decide to sleep here I can’t believe that I am sleeping on dusty sand. The next morning I wake up effortlessly. I am walking along starving and muttering to my self keep on walking don’t stop then I see a car racing towards me, The car suddenly stops right in front of me and takes me home.

Naga Staircase By Tyron


I was on holiday in Chiang Mai Thailand and I went on a day tour to the naga staircase. It had been raining the following night so there was dew on the fresh green grass and trees. The staircase had stone blocks that looked like they had been polished. As I was climbing the staircase I started to notice that there were lots of insects around me. As you got further up the stairs you could start to see dragon statues on the side of the staircase finally I had reached the top and I realised that it was worth it.

The Mysterious Sighting By Tyron

Once I was sitting in my pale white bath with a bright orange candle beside me in a long exhausting power cut. When I saw a mysterious figure lurking in the hall way.
So I hopped out of the bath, put my clothes on and grabbed the candle anxiously and waited. Then I saw the figure separate a piece of the carpet , I start creeping towards the figure it starts to run away from me I stop  for a split second and I hear a meow
And then I realise it is my cat tom who was in the hall.

The Serene Sea By Eden Paulsen
I am sitting here on the beach with its creamy white sand and crystal blue water. We came here on a boat, but we call it a "car" because  we are always driving in it. Wow! " suddenly" I've got the urge to go swimming . SPLASH! I've just dived into "the" deep, blue warm water.The ocean is such a magical place  it  is full of life.It's multi colour fish makes it so serene. The different fish swim around crazily like bees buzzing in a bee hive, while like birds , a sailor tweeted his chants cheerfully. AAAAAhhhRRR!! I've just seen a Shark Fin.
The Secrets of the Forest By Eden Paulsen
Dawn has broken.Dew still lies lazily on lushes green leaves.There are glistening snail tracks winding up a branch that had fallen to the wet squishy moss beneath it. Flutter a red and black robin swooped down to a bare branch after gliding gracefully across the ocean breeze and salty air. He talked and yelled at his friend like a noisy little parrot.A leave is trickling water into a hole where a worm ance wriggled it's way through the moist damp soil, that has soaked up rain water. Strangely I see a purple tulip blooming...A new beginning.

A Majestic sight By Tamsyn


Morning is the only way to unearth the beauty of this enchanted forest. Now, as I’m standing on these slate wooden steps, ascending to the top of our glorious world I ponder, how this could possibly be real? Rays of blissful sunlight stream down through strong, magnificent arching trees.  A towering sycamore tree, with leaves of a fresh, healthy green, bows down to greet me. The earthy smell of composting leaves wafts through my nostrils and the merry trees burst with life, when mixtures of native birds land on smooth branches of the grand trees.

This forest contains hidden secrets.

Deep hallway by Matthew

As I found my self  in a house full of books and spiders it has seem  like a old kingdom.Swish! the wind came it felt like someone's sole has come past like the flash I slowly walk and see a very long  hallway hehehehe I scarmed like a witch chasing someone for 24 hours oh no oh no oh no I trap in here forever 

The Siamese Fighters By Eden
Quietly,a mysterious Orange Cat approached a magical rock bath in the  centre of an hidden cave with ferns and beautiful native bush. He stopped and then listened. Everything was still like the earth itself was still. A peculiar "SPLASH" came from the bath. There he saw a glowing Siamese fighter ( fish ) swimming around gloriously in misty water. Suddenly another Siamese fighter appeared.The ground separated, the backyard caught fire and surrounded the bath. Then a quick stroke of the strong fin and a Siamese fighter floated to its end. The cat panicked, closed its eyes to find everything gone.

Jayden. The beautiful beach!

The car suddenly stopped at the beach.  I am here with my friends today, and it is as hot as an oven. The waves bring a clear sound of thunderous crashing to my ear, there is a clean break and good conditions for surfing. The sky has not one cloud, and it looks like someone has painted over the white fluffy clouds with blue paint.  All of the surfers out there are in luck; the waves are perfect for surfing. The surfers look like ants compared to the waves. I look around and see the beautiful sight of Karekare rock.
 
 

BOOM!!!! by logan

One time I was driving to work.When I was driving along there was traffic.That always happened when I always drive to work.But this day I just noticed something suspicious  but it was just my mind.It usually took half an hour to get out of the noisy traffic.When I was out of the traffic I could drive peacefully.Then I stopped because of the traffic.When I saw the car behind me the person didn't look on the road.A couple seconds later BOOM.It suddenly crashed into me!!!I was totally suddenly about it happening.

Tuesday 2 April 2013



By Georgia
‘Hello’, I murmured,
‘Is anyone there’? Creak! I slowly pushed the old wooden door and walked into the mysterious abandoned house. Aaah! I screamed as I felt something run past my legs. I looked down and saw a skinny orange cat go past me. I walked into a large room and screamed as several bats separated from the roof and came at me. I screamed, tripped and fell into an old rusty bath. I got up to leave, when I heard the door lock .From the outside. I was trapped. I sat down and started to sob loudly.