When I was younger my
mum used to tell me these stories about an enchanted kingdom. I loved these
stories and would always dream of being there. Years later I have learned more
about this amazing place and decided that I would find the kingdom. But it
would be hard to find ‘The Stairways of Fate’. Going through the tough terrains
and harsh conditions I saw before my bloodshot eyes one stairway which led to
the kingdom, the other to being lost for eternity. I was so ecstatic, yet
trembling with fear. I took a careful step to the left.Thursday 4 April 2013
The Kingdom By Fenella
When I was younger my
mum used to tell me these stories about an enchanted kingdom. I loved these
stories and would always dream of being there. Years later I have learned more
about this amazing place and decided that I would find the kingdom. But it
would be hard to find ‘The Stairways of Fate’. Going through the tough terrains
and harsh conditions I saw before my bloodshot eyes one stairway which led to
the kingdom, the other to being lost for eternity. I was so ecstatic, yet
trembling with fear. I took a careful step to the left.
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I wonder where the left staircase will take you? You certainly left the reader wondering. You have used some excellent words eg "harsh, ecstatic, terrains". Keep up the great effort Fenella. I would now like to see you add a simile or metaphor to your work. - Mrs Fraser
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