Tuesday, 26 March 2013

the scream by cate


Trees curled over trying to grab me as I ran past them and ascended the long ancient stair case.   Fluorescent green moss covered what used to be ground and bushes of small multi coloured leaves stretched as far as I could see. My aching feet were slipping on the damp steps as I ran but I couldn’t stop now, not with them chasing me. As I stopped to rest puffing franticly I looked around, this somewhat beautiful park was completely deserted and so quiet you could hear a pin drop a mile away. But could you hear a girl scream?

3 comments:

  1. That is a very interesting piece of writing. You have used some great WOW words. You certainly painted a picture in my mind with your choice of words. Keep up the excellent effort with your writing.

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  2. wow good descriptive words and good figurtive language and good hard work you painted a pitcure in my mind from josh

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  3. This is great, I really like the words you used. From jay

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