Once upon
a time I was walking down the road and I saw a mysterious white fence and I
could just see through a little bit and I walked away and then I went to my
mate’s house and he brought his ball and then we went to the beach and we
walked past the fence and we were passing the ball to each other and then I
missed the ball and it went over the fence so we went over and there was a
little pink bath with a weird statue of a small orange cat. It was weird. (:
Mrs Fraser - Exactly 100 words Sage, excellent. I would like to see you go back and edit this to put some WOW words in. How were you walking down the road? Your whole 100 words is one sentence, can you break it down into smaller sentences and take out some of the "and".
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