Tuesday 26 March 2013

story number 1 i woke up by josh

I woke up. The house across the road had put in a mysterious bath. That morning I saw the family go to work. I got dressed and went to have a look. I went over and saw that they left the brown leather door open. It was weird. It's like they wanted me to go in and see the bath. I went over and these two orange cats greeted me at the door. They weren't any ordinary cats because they had a birthmark on their heads. Then they separated. One went to the bath and one went to the table
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  1. room7geis26 March 2013 at 20:00

    Cute photo Josh. I like the story you have told with only 100 words. I would now like you to read over it and use a thesaurus to see if you could make some of the words into WOW words.

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