Monday 25 March 2013

The Graveyard by Asha

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The freezing winter breath made it’s way into the obscure woods revealing the occult secrets of the forest. A dispersing mist reached that area turning that location into a forgotten graveyard. After that occurrence no human has ever stepped into the abominable grounds of the abandoned cemetery.
Everyone speaks about it in an unpleasant way, giving lousy feedback about the dreadful place. Brightness is never to be seen here, therefore all the hideous creatures are hidden in holes in trees or subterranean burrows. The vegetation has died and nothing grows from the ground.
What an atrocious place this is.

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  3. Mrs Fraser - Great start Asha. I like some of the language you have used. I would now like you to go back and have a look at some of the words you have used, does it make sense, and check the spelling.
    Can you add a photo of what you are talking about or would you like me to do that?

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