“I died in a bath,” said Salome, “I was in the foamy, bubble
bath, bathing when a meow entered my ears. An orange tabby cat had snuck around
the bathroom door. When I looked up in its eyes, I saw a mysterious, cloudy blue.
Then I floated upwards and died.” Salome was my twin sister but she had sadly
passed away. We were so close though that we couldn’t be separated. She came
back to me. No one can see or hear her. “The tabby cat!” I exclaimed, “Could it
be our new neighbour’s cat?”
An interesting piece of writing Tamsyn. I would like you to read the comment I left you last night and see if you can do the same with this piece of writing. Remember to underline the words that I gave you. Read the homework sheet again please.
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