The mysterious noise
As I walked up the stairs my heart was thumping as if there was a shattering earthquake
everywhere.One step after the other I was walking silently like a ninja Splash! the MYSTERIOUS sound was repeating itself like a tape which was stuck .I got closer and the sound got louder. A strange figure appeared from the BATH , I noticed orange marks everywhere and as I got closer the marks started to SEPARATE. I was scared so I brought my CAT with me,to investigate.I was shocked to see nothing and as I blinked my eyes everything disappeared. Suddenly I screamed, help out loud.
By Shaurya
By Shaurya
Mrs Fraser - you certainly have used some good WOW words here Shaurya. I like how you describe taking one step after another. I have taken the underlining off as I found it difficult to read with it. I would like you to edit this again and put spaces in after full stops and commas.
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